“寶劍鋒從磨礪出”，經(jīng)過一個多月的訓(xùn)練，無錫外國語學(xué)校高一年級新生在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面取得了巨大的進步?！锻鈬Z學(xué)生英語習(xí)作欣賞》欄目將延續(xù)去年的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)，陸續(xù)在校方微信公眾平臺刊登平時的習(xí)作以供廣大讀者欣賞，同時，激勵這些優(yōu)秀的苗子進一步茁壯成長、秀木成林。
    【高中英語習(xí)作欣賞（二）】

What does sharing-bicycle service care about?

《共享單車關(guān)心的是什么？》

高一直升（2）班 丁柯瑋



    Recently, a group of “spirits” showed up in our city. We call them sharing-bicycles. The appearance of sharing-bicycle service makes our daily life easier and more convenient. While enjoying the nice service, we may stop and think about what sharing-bicycle service cares about.
    First of all, it is obvious that sharing-bicycle service brings benefits to us, which makes the saying “going while thinking” possible. Just 1 yuan or even cheaper, and you can take a bicycle to any place you would prefer to go to in Wuxi. What’s more, in other respect, riding a bicycle instead of taking a car or a bus helps us keep fit, and undoubtedly, it is also a good way to lose weight as it is already the spring time with summer not far away. In China, there are lots of citizens who are overweight. The local government and companies offering sharing-bicycles may have the awareness to help us become healthier. Last but not least, taking a bicycle can help reduce air pollution, which is one of the biggest environmental problems in the world. China’s pollution is also very serious as well.
    To conclude, sharing-bicycle service cares about not only money but also our life and health. As a result, we should offer our support to the service.

Teacher’s comments:
    Sharing-bicycle service is quite a heated topic today, as what we can see in the daily conversations, news and on TV. Actually, we can say it is EVERYWHERE in our life. In this composition, Ding Kewei begins with a metaphor by comparing the bicycles to the spirits, which can instantly catch readers’ attention. And then, he elaborates on the topic in three aspects, respectively, the cost, the health and the environment. The former two mainly deal with the personal benefits while the last one is about the advantage to the society, from which we can see his way of thinking about the “care” of the sharing-bicycle service.
—— Deng Fang (鄧芳)